I flew away from Rosaline’s home. My heart full of guilty. I
cried. I rested for a while on a tree branch. I remember the incident on
Rosaline’s house. I cried again, I did not mean to hurt her. I confused. I
asked to my self “what should I do now?”.
“What are you doing ugly dove?” said the tree.
“My aunt shooed me” I answered.
“I do not care what happen on you, I do not like you take a rest on
my branch, go away!” shouted the tree.
“Sorry for disturbed you” I apologized.
I flew again. Actually I tired and hungry too but I did not
know what should I ate. I saw a bird from a distance. She ate rices. “Is that
delicious?” I thought. Then, that bird flew away. I tried to eat the rices in
the middle of the field. “Urgghh, this is very bad” I thought. I was about to
leave the field, but unfortunately a framer saw me and he shooted me. I flew
away as fast as a jet plane. I was very lucky, the farmer missed to shoot me. I
felt there was something wrong with my leg. Evidently my leg was injured. I
decided to take a rest for a while. I found an abandoned old house. I took a
rest there for a few days. I ate some cockroaches and also lizards. That was very
bad but I did not have any choice. I met a snake in that house. I was so
surprised.
“Hey, poor dove what are you doing here?” asked the snake.
“I am sorry snake,my leg was injured when I tried to eat the
farmer’s rices on the field. Then I decided to take a rest in this house. I am
sorry if I disturbed you” I answered.
“Oh poor dove, you do not need to apologize it is no
problems for me” said the snake.
“By the way are you hungry?” asked the snake.
“Yes of course” I answered.
“Well, follow me we will look something to eat” said the
snake.
I followed him. Then a strange voice spoke behind me “Do not
followed that snake!” said that strange voice.
“Hey snake, did you hear that?” I asked
“Ha? No I did not hear anything?” answered the snake.
“Selena! I told to you do not follow that snake! He is
dangerous!” That strange voice warned me again.
cool ! this is getting intensed. I wanted to be a bird once but I do not want to have worms as my meal everyday. Haha.
ReplyDeleteGood story line Bel, but I thin you need to pay more attention on your grammar. For example, you should have said " Do not follow that snake." instead of " Do not followed that snake."
Will selena follow that voice? And from where was that voice? I want to know more. Please update soon. After all your story is really interesting, and I like the way you put the conversation there to make the story more lively.
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