Thursday, 28 April 2016

The Lost Soul - Part 1

PREFACE

I tripped over my lifetime. I have been through many things in my life until today. I do not think like other peoples think about this life. I do not know which one is right and which one is wrong. Seems like the things that you thought it is correct does not mean it is correct maybe it can be wrong things. However, I do not want to be like this forever.

My First Disaster

My name is Selena. I was born in Arizona. I am an orphan. Peoples said that I have a pretty face. When I was 3 years old, I had a perfect childhood that everyone may not be able to have it. I had kind parents. I love them so much. My parents was an owner from the one of the biggest companies in Arizona.

Someday, my parents partner had destroyed my entire life. I do not know clearly what their problems. They threatened my parents. They threatened to kill my whole family.  My parents entrusted me to my aunt her name is Rosaline. Unfortunately, my parents died when they are on the way to fix their problem with their partner. They was killed by someone that I did not know. I was so sad. Since that day, I can not think clearly as other people do. I became a naughty girl, but I did not mean it. I just wanted to be happy with my own way.

Rosaline is a mean woman. She loves me like my parents love me. She had different way to educated me. She used violence way to educate me. At first, I rejected the way she educated me but recently I know she wanted me become the best person. Until one day, she became very angry to me.
"Selena! I educated you to become a success person not a bad person!" she said
"I did not mean it Rosaline, I just..." I answered
"I do not want to listen any reasons again, I curse you!"
Then, a blue light shines bright around me. I felt my body become smaller. I felt my wings. I was surprised at that time. I barely knew that Rosaline has supernatural powers. She is a witch. I looked at the mirror, I became a dove! an ugly dove!
Then Rosaline said "If you want to be a human again, you must changed your attitude, discover who you are and the last you must find someone who want to take care of you with his heart and love you no matter what happen. Remember, you can not to be a human again if you skip one of the rules or do that rules randomly because to be loved, you have to love yourself first"
"Now go away from here! you can not comeback here until you become a human again" she continued.

2 comments:

  1. a horror! It is a nice one bel. It got me into the story while i was reading it. I bet you are one of the scary movies lovers eh ? I found some mistakes in your writing. I think you have to pay attention more on the tenses you are using. If you have decided to use the past tense then the sentences should have stayed in the past tense until the end and it applies vice versa :) Anyway, it is a good one.

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  2. I confused with the genre of this story, but it makes me want to know more. I think my curiousness win. Can not wait for the next part Bel. Good job.

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