"Let your past make you better not bitter" - unknown
That must be something happened in someone life who creates that person today.
Hi, I am Laurensia Belansa Endrakarensa. I was born in
Surabaya, Indonesia on March 18,1996. There are so many moment on my life that create me today.
In 2002 my mother sent me to the Elementary School in Surabaya. Something happened in that day. Actually, I was a talkative person, but someday when my school celebrated a ceremony I heard one of my friend whispered to my another friend "Do you like Bela? she is very talkative. I do not like her". I am a sensitive person so since that day, I decided to become a quite person. Another bad moment was, when I was on 5 grade I had a teacher of math. Almost everyday I had math class. Unfortunately, almost everyday I came late to school. I could not do anything because my father escorted me when I went to school. He had another activities in the morning and that made me late. Everyday my teachers judge me in front of the class. I really hate it. That was a bad moments of my childhood. Since that day, I hate people who judge somebody without know the reasons.
I continued my study to Junior High
School when I was 13 years old. I had bad moments in Junior High School. I became a member of a Junior high school in Surabaya ( I do not want to mention the name) at the began, It was so difficult I could not follow almost all of the subjects. I passed my first grade in Junior High School with standard scores. I tried to learn more when I was on 8 grade. Unfortunately, I did not pass my grade because I had another problem too. Then, I moved to another school. I stayed in 8 grade. I was so unhappy. It became a very difficult moment in my life because I must adapt again. I had much more better scores than before, but I hated the teachers. They were bullying students too much, they did not want to know the reason of someone mistakes then they judge. That made me to become an introvert person, because I thought no one could understand me. I passed my study at Junior High
School on June, 2012.
I continued my study in a Vocational High School in July, 2012. I studied culinary there, I was so happy because I love culinary. I love all of the little things of my school. Although sometimes I was tired but I was happy. I felt they more appreciated me. I had a good scores, good teachers and also good friends. It was my high achievement in my life because I got ranked 3 in class for 3 years. I also could did new experience that I did not like before such got closer with my teachers. They were really friendly.
Then, I passed my Vocational High School on June, 2015. I was very happy, but I had a bad moment in the same month that changed my life. I lost my father because he passed away on June 17, 2015. I was very sad, but life must go on right? I became more stronger than before, I continued my life although it was hard. Now, I become a member of the English department at Widya Mandala University since August, 2015.
I am sorry to hear about your father.
ReplyDeleteHowever, Bella, I believe that you are a tough girl (not physically), right?
Anyway, your story is interesting. Why don't you try to add direct/indirect sentences? It will beautify your writing. I hope you will try it, soon!